Animatic - Second Version Following Feedback

Below is the link to my second animatic. Following feedback from my precious animatic, it was decided that due to the amount of time I had to complete my animaion, I had to cut out about a minute of foottage and lose a character. This meant that I have now had to sacrifice the character of the Father and his entire involvement in the film. Although this is a disappointing change it is necessary and really the only way I will get to complete my final film in time. It was also felt that with the already limited time, there wasn't enough footage to explore and build the back story for Cal and develop the relationship between him and his father, so it was decided the story would stay just as strong if we left out the father completely.

https://vimeo.com/88759980